Place

Language turns
to pebbles in my mouth.
If only my tongue were a song -
I’d breathe temples.



Comments (5) left to “Place”

  1. A. wrote:

    i love this one – the visual is like the transformers/creatures they have in mythical tales & animated films! very neat

  2. DB wrote:

    hi there…though m not much an intellactual guy to understand poems..but some i liked this one…
    though i wasnt searching for poems..i came accross ur website as i was just searching for my old friend..manchali…
    good work…all the best..
    ciao

  3. Anuradha wrote:

    Hi,
    your poems are really great! I heard you perform in Delhi – i am a filmmaker – experimental if you like. Wondering if you might be interested in doing some collaborative work – your writing – for some very abstract visuals in my films.

    Do let me know what you think. – -

    cheers
    anuradha

  4. a wrote:

    sorry about last ‘comment’ – didn’t mean it to be posted. Wd. appreciate an email.

    thanks

  5. Kevin Fogarty wrote:

    Wow. What a great visual.

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